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December 29, 2007
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Die well... God
-Deathmask-Saint Seiya G <3333
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如果邪恶 是华丽残酷的乐章
它的终场 我会亲手写上。
~夜的第七章
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What is it you said to the kid? It ain't about how hard you hit, it's about how hard you can get hit and keep moving forward, how much you can take and keep moving forward...
Much
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If I say something that could be taken in more than one way, and one of those ways is offensive to you, I meant it the other way.
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"Are we Real?.... or are we living in someone else's dream?"
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cuori spezzati di tutto il mondo... unitevi!
First the good things: The pose, is lovely. Well planned, and done. You picked colors that work well with one another, and a background that wouldnt overshadow the subject.
Things you need to work on: Skin tones, profile of the female face, lighting, and, coloring.
You have a good understanding of some things, but others, not so much. Ill start with the female profile.
You have drawn her face to be very much like the side of a box. Flat, no curves after the nose. A womans face is curvy. Very little, if any, flat lines.
Skin tones. The skin has many different colors mixed into it. Blues, reds, purples, greens. You need to learn to paint with those colors. Not the burn tool. Not just one color. This goes for the clothes as well. And anything else you might do. They have many different colors in them too. Even if the item looks like it only has one color, it really has many. If you want to learn how to paint, you must learn how colors work, and how they bring life into the painting.
Your lighting here . Doesnt work I guess is the nice way of putting it. Your lighting her from many different places, and that makes it very confusing to the viewer. Also, it makes everything in the image look flat. There should be one, maybe two light sources. No more. (Until you have a better understand of light anyway.)
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I'm a lovely little cupcake, DON'T EAT ME! D=
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